An hereditary filthy mind?
I love faces
Especially eyes
As some soul (if existing) may be visible there
Since I am in wheelchair
My view of humanity if limited to fly-height
Creepy kids said that could be useful
I got pissed off again
Not that I mind oral sex
But eyes are more meaningful
Ouch
A contest entry
- Personal Memories and Thoughts by Blood Slurpie.
320 points, ended November 26, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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-Since I am in wheelchair
missing an a?
interesting piece. second to last line was the best. -
haha what is this? I don't understand it but I love it.
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faces...
Another little gem from you. I'm becoming addicted to them! Good luck in the contest!
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i think your poems are so candid i am addicted,, well done and best of luck peter,,my view of humanity is limited by everything
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This is a very deep poem, and you did an amazing job with this. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving Celebration or Thursday! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas as well. May God bless you in your journey through life and defining the ups and downs that we call life. Good luck to you in this contest, and keep up the amazing job. You done awesome with this poem.
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