In a world of placid dreams
are fictional realities.
Cyber-netic lithium runs
Through veins of silicone.
Darkness infiltrates the frame,
shattered from abusive logic.
Articulate formatted dreams
:||of analytic mind control||:
Mystic sphere's of energy
explodes in coded deconstruction.
Fluidic ||electricity||
sparks fires built of madness.
Violence lashes; copulating,
existence set in over-drive.
Injection of lethargic thoughts
Transcending through this atmosphere.
Symmetric technicality,
Corruption of this enterprise.
Fear arousal provocation,
counter-point of stimulation.
Beaten,
broken,
laceration,
synthetic spectral cerebration.
Streaming codes of information
Lines a soul of astral light.
Wires twine—
Entranced in mind—
A fantasized solidity.
Radiation, liquid thoughts
Contaminates my innocence.
Break through this insanity,
Intersect humanity,
shatter strengthened fabrications
dissect hallucination.
Replicate to decimate,
Destroy irregularity.
Encoded psyche strives to meet
A biohazard clarity.
Systematic mental state,
Breaking down infectious hate.
Electro-static slips away
Submersed within obscurity.
Distorted realms,
Aphotic smiles,
Ciphering this lunacy.
Above the sphere
--galactic state—
ghostly alienation.
Emotional pulsing stimulus
Is digitized in manic-phase.
Cerebral cortex disengaged
Electro-mental overload.
Flesh of data—codified,
Robotic eye's of neon blue,
Circuit shortened; volts have ceased,
Discontinued automation.
Psycho-analytic mind
metacenter liquefied.
A space, a time,
celestial ride,
perception of your formulation.
Sapphire world of
coded ink,
a place of algorithmic fix.
Information superhighway,
welcome to deficiency,
system slowly reconnects
a vacancy of ruination.
Author notes
For options: Robots, sci-fi
Ok, first off, i know EXACTLY WHAT i wrote here. Pretty much, it's about the corruption of this world and how we're all killing ourselves. I RELATE THIS ALL TO CYBORGS since we're pretty much fuckin programmed NOT TO THINK for ourselves. I also interlinked my own pain and gave it an emotional twist to add to it and show how the world has "brought me down" in a non-emo sense.
Hey Sinead, haha, first off.....i wish you THE BEST OF LUCK deciphering this and trying to figure it out. I let my mom read it and she had trouble (understanding it i mean, but THAT'S THE WHOLE POINT! It's filled with hidden meanings and emotions)
Option 4
NAME:
:||Synthetic-Nightmare||:
"My life is like a barbie, boring and lifeless!"
NORMALLY, given the contest options, i would choose the serial killer choice (since murder poetry is more my style, but....this poem is a new TYPE style of writing for me and not very popular!! So....decided to get feedback!)
Hey Dmonik!!!
I used TWO LINES from our collab!!
=)
I didn't steal any of your stuff but used ones i had created. LOL
This one spawned off the one we collab'd on!!!
A contest entry
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Marvellous once again my dear friend lol
. Sci-fi related, a different approach from you. Anyway this was great, a little difficult to comprehend the terminology but it was purely a fantastic read. The ryhme is great along with the atmosphere created and the whole concept was stunning. Great work!
~Emily~ xx
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I really like this piece but in rule:
"3. No sticky caps, weird accentuation of words, or chat lingo," by weird accentuation of words, I mean what you have in lines eight and eleven.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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Hmmm...
Intersecting the programmer, my silence would never be the be all and end all of things on that plane. But none the less interesting thought process young lady!!
*Silence is just a ghost long live the ghost...hahaha
All the best,
~T.S~
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BAH HAHA,
thanks, it means a lot coming from you.
Hell,
you are an AMAZING WRITER my dark, twisted friend! ^_^
Thanks much for the comment
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wow. i dont think ive ever read a poem as unique and beautifully written as this one.
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LOL
Awe this piece was SOOOOO MUCH FUN!
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WOW! This poem rocks. It has a unique voice of its own and a neat style. The futuristic robotic sound is really cool. I have yet to read a poem like this. You painted this poem well and with a good use of vocabulary.
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Im glad i allowed prewrites, this is wonderful. your verbage is really original. not a dull moment. thank you for entering and good luck
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Nice.
I...wow. I got half of it and it was all beautiful. I cant describe...just....wow. Is there any more i can say? -
Awesome
Haven't got a clue what it means but I love it
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Good write and thank you for entering and good luck
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this was really cool, this is like a poem about a deranged guy from ghost in the shell, very good.
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Meh, use them...you use them better than I do anyway, lol. YOu used them well
I like this write Syn
Tell me...are your favourite films cyborg orientated? lol
Great writing Hon
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HAHA,
as NORMAL as this sounds......
I'M A GORE-WHORE FUCKERS!!!!!!!! LOLOLOL
Give me murder and i'll be happy! lol
fuck that sounded so twisted.
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