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Christmas eve......

It's christmas eve night,
The children fast asleep.
with thoughts so deep,
They can't wait for christmas mornings delight.

As we decorate the tree.
We turn to see,
A flash go by.
As we look to the sky,
What could it be?

It's my papa dear,
Driving up on a sled.
with horses dressed as raindeer,
and he's all covered in red.
pulling up by the shed.

Dressed as santaclaus,
Ringing his bell.
Singing jingle bells,
As he continues without pause.

The children awake,
As they stumble down to see.
Their eyes light up with glee,
I knew he was not fake.

It's santa mama,with a look of grace,
as they sit with a gift covered in red ribbon lace.
Their hearts full of joy,
As they open thier toys.
With tears running down santa's red rosy face.



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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    January 8, 2008
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    lovely

    thanks for your entry


    becks


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    December 29, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry

    How sweet and very precious. I am sure that santa had a wonderful gift of is own that didn't come wrapped up but was shown on those bright smiling faces of the little ones.

    God Bless and Merry Christmas
    Tammy


  • PortkeyToNowhere
    December 15, 2007

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    This is cute! I wish my parents did this. Lovely poem though and good luck with the contest!

    Hugs Nicole xoxoxoxo

  • ecrivain01
    December 15, 2007

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    As somebody mentioned ...

    there are a number of typos that should be fixed. It's a nice poem, and I'm glad that you have such good Xmas memories to file away.

    Thanks for entering and Happy Holidays.


  • February Moon gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    This poem seems choppy.There are some typos I think should be corrected, might be better if you re-read it. Other than that, I enjoyed what it was about. Thank you for entering.
    Chelsea


  • goddesskevauna
    December 5, 2007
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    Awww! That's just cute. And a lovely background as well.


  • Poetry and I Inc
    December 5, 2007

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    awwww, how very heartfelt and filled with love and joy. Great ending as well. Thanks for your entry and good luck.


  • Frozentearz
    December 4, 2007

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    Though I liked this poem it mentioned presents,
    please go back and see the contest rules.
    Warm thoughts this HOliday season to you and yours.
    Frozentearz


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    December 2, 2007

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    A very good poem, it's nice to see so many poets rhyme.
    Thank you for your entry, please join us in one of the other contests, if not all. Thanks again..Sue


  • Elvenfairy
    November 29, 2007

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    what can I say? This was wonderful. The childrens joy just leapt off the computer screen in this poem. Great write. Thansk for entering my contest and good luck!


  • dead-love-for-fun
    November 26, 2007
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    nice write


  • daviscth silver member
    November 25, 2007

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    This is a wonderful holiday poem. Thank you so much for posting in my contest and all the best luck at judging. Cathy


  • parntsoftwins
    November 24, 2007

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    I love it, the wonderful memories of when santa came about as a child. Times as that where we swore he was real, and that confirmed our thoughts!!!


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 24, 2007
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    A heartfelt poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Candy6
    November 24, 2007
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    A heartfelt Christmas poem this is. I like the background....it's beautiful.


  • Emile
    November 24, 2007

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    Good

    You have a magic way in telling a story like this, especially when it is directed at kids. Your words are bubbling over with fun and excitement, well in tune with the holiday season. Your love of children and life shines brightly throughout your poem. Great job and Merry Christmas!

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