Icy frozen gale
Northern caresser waltzing
Pale flakes touched her
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Packed into orb
Sailed swiftly across back yard
Delightful snowball
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Wintry beautiful
Softly artistic embrace
Iciness in bliss
Author notes
Winter Haiku's
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You put some effort into this little chain and I enjoyed it very much I will read this again
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I completely agree with 'the Godfather'
this is superb..I love the picture
and the imagery and word choices
are so uniquely you..
You're in a class of you own!!
Outstanding !!
~Pastel
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Love it!
Outstanding, astounding, and astonishing poem! I can't say no more! Your imagery in this piece blows me away, your pic helps! What is a haiku? I've never known what that is exactly.
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Very Icy!
Beautiful Haiku, definately, Iciness in bliss,
the warming only begins after the final reading of this piece.
Good Luck,
Sincerely,
Sassy
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another warming piece by you mrs e i think your such a gifted writer i love your work jeff will have a hard time judging believe me
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another warming piece by you mrs e i think your such a gifted writer i love your work jeff will have a hard time judging believe me
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haiku suits you miss,,your icy maiden has warmed me,,
good luck xx peter
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I love Haikus,
and you certainly did a marvelous job with these three! Rave on poet! But now I am cold...
Beautiful job fair one.
All my love,
Brazos
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Excellent
This is realy beautiful
Love it all
Great picture
Rick
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