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Let it die

Will we never talk anymore?
Is this all we were wanted for?
Just to leave the story with no end,
And now you'll never be my friend.

Pride is such a cost,
That it leaves everything lost.
Do you or I want it now?
Or have we lost it somehow?

The smiles, laughter why has it gone?
Was it just a season to last this long?
Why didn't I see it coming?
But life is always in the running.

And even though I was to say my peace,
I feel my pain increase.
I wasn't trying to hurt you,
But intentions always turn through.

And what do I have to show for it?
That I have another mistake to admit.
I can't help anyone, I can't help you.
I lost my way,what should I do?

Barriers, I build them high
Because within them some part of me has to die.

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  • carrying a cross
    November 26, 2007

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    such a sad one.

    I know how you feel. We all have barriers that we hide behind. They aren't healthy, but it's how we protect ourselves from the world. I wish that I could ease the pain this has caused you. As always, great poem!