Christmas Eve is here again
Festivities have begun
I expect him very soon now
For his yearly dose of fun
The red coat and the black boots
Are quite sexy and enticing
But seeing him crawling on all fours
Is far much more exciting
No batteries are needed
I know what gets him started
He's ready to do my bidding
As soon as my legs are parted
I’ll taunt him and I’ll scold him
And make him plead for more
I’ll ride him like a reindeer
Across the bedroom floor
I’ll bend him over across my knees
And spank him till he’s red
I’ll make him fill me with good cheer
As I lie upon the bed
I’ll pinch him and I’ll bite him
And twist his nipples tightly
I’ll scratch my nails across his back
And make his eyes shine brightly
I’ll lick him and I’ll squeeze him
And tease him till he cries
I’ll force him deep inside me
As he writhes between my thighs
Then when I am fully sated
I’ll have myself a rest
He’ll sit and wait obediently
For the part that he loves best
With a “Ho Ho Ho” and a “Merry Christmas”
I’ll truss him up tight to the beams
And then I’ll use the ball gag
To stifle his happy screams
A little tweak here, a sharp slap there
He'll tremble as I cover his eyes
I know exactly what he wants
And its not sherry and mince pies
I’ll use my feather duster
To tickle and delight him
Then I’ll use my bullwhip
To thrash him and excite him
My sweet submissive Santa
He’s always a naughty boy
Calling on me for punishment
Then leaving full of Christmas joy
A contest entry
- NAUGHTY CHRISTMAS........... ADULTS ONLY!!!!!! by shimmer.
450 points, ended December 7, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Christmas is coming.... by islekine.
525 points, ended November 28, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty Erotica................. Come on people (18+ only) by Tatfreak.
330 points, ended December 3, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Christmas Prompts by Judith Chandler.
525 points, ended December 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pick your favorite prewrite by Loveandblessings2u.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Perfect Night of Holiday Erotica by SatanicTemptation09.
600 points, ended December 29, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic comedy by aronator.
450 points, ended April 3, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LMAOROF
This is great, wonderful inmagery and lets the mind wander through some really great moments! Definitely worthy of the trophies it has been awarded..thanks for the smiles and the great read..Merry Christmas..Ken IBT
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That was amazing! Way to use imagery!! I loved how you said what was happening but did not make it indecently gross. IT WAS HILARIOUS and riveting at the same time!! IT really makes me think of that song "I Saw Mommy Kissing Santa Clause" but w/ a dirty twist!!
I especially liked:
With a “Ho Ho Ho” and a “Merry Christmas”
I’ll truss him up tight to the beams
And then I’ll use the ball gag
To stifle his happy screams
I never thought Santa as bondage kind of guy
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LOL!!!!!! This is great!!!!! What a delightfully naughty Christmas poem!!!! Thank you for poating in my contest and all the best at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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LOL! This is so funny and a great piece
you have written here. Good luck to you
with this one in the contest!
Jeremy0826 -
First I like to ask you to please not 5 star my comment or comment me back in anyway. I am trying real hard not to find out who anyone is, at this time.
Now your poem had me LMBO, I must say that I really enjoyed it a lot. It was a fun read. Some Christmas at your house. I bet Santa, got just what he asked for. LoL
This was a great write, love your story, excellent flow.
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
and good luck.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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I really enjoyed this poem! Not only was it a great take on a 'naughty christmas' but flowed amazingly and had great humor in it! Its nice to see someone who doesn't take everything so seriously.
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"leaving full of Christmas joy" Well, I guess he deserves something back after doling out all those toys. It gave me a laugh and all the rhymes and so on are in order. Everything flows well.
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Great write I love the whole bondage aspect of it also it was just what i was looking for out of the entries in my contest. good luck
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Hahahaaa!
Oh, that's classic. Aho! Greatly amusing. Bravo!
Lys, The Panda Empress
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This is damn cute and I found myself smiling through the whole thing. The grammar though, is terrible- the tenses are all over the place and it's distracting. If you fix that and want to re-enter,please do so. If you don't- it's still a cute piece.
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no doubt your Santa will enoy his Christmas gift this year
Joe
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Oh my goodness!
lol....a truly different take!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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chokes on my mince pie, lol, i have seen writings where Santa does the dominating, but don't recall ever seeing Santa being dominated quite like this. thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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