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Weeping Willow



She is a cyclone.
She is powerful.

Her Gemini divide

always spinning in opposition
.

 

 

  breaking

 in her wake

 

the ground, her resolve

 

 gusts of guilt swarm her secrets

 like locusts, like demons

 

It is a spiral-

 her nature.

 

Only the center is safe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • hyacinthgirl silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    I think this is a final draft