Like music to my ears
Like the flowers in the cup
Nothing is more beautiful here
Than the Heaven that lies above
Like my longing for poetry
that I carry it around with me
So I could share it to the world
For all the inspired to see
Like all the words I write on paper
Each and every day
So then when the people listen
They are all carried away
Like how I am different
How I like to read
Unlike all other kids
Who call me a creep
All I have to say
Is please leave me be
because the only thing I need
is a bit of Heavenly Peace
November 24, 2007
Author notes
Option #4
My life is like a barbie, boring and lifeless!
Matthew Pak
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest and this is a good write. Good luck and happy writing.
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A bit too trite for my taste.
What you have described isn't so unique.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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You really ought to win this contes.You have a very great way of expressing yourself and your feelings and what you want people to know and think about.You are very talanted and gifted for someone so young.You are a fine poet and in the years to come will be one of the greats I think.It is sad the way people are treated in this world and judged.You got your message through loud and clear and that is the sign of a great poet.Good luck to you in all that you do and God Bless.
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