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Autumn's Finale

The black pitch of night
tosses huge white flowered swirls,
Winter's ovation. 












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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    Yes Yes Yes we have a good haiku here! I like it and will read it again


  • georgie
    November 24, 2007

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    amusing... my name tis 'the endlish rose'... i always assumed it was white.
    blesses be,
    feral,
    xxx