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[ icicles on the eaves ]

icicles on the eaves
sun shining through
winter rainbows

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    This haiku has caught my eye I am going to come back to this and comment again Now doubt it is very good and unique but I need to ponder it a little while


    • Pollycheck
      December 5, 2007
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      Swan song

      Thank you so much for the silver. I am glad that you enjoyed this haiku.


  • azure85 gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    What a beautiful picture is within this haiku, the prisms of light from winter sun and ice. Nicely done, good luck in the contest.

    • Pollycheck
      November 24, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you for your comments. I am not looking forward to seeing these anytime soon, but I guess it is inevitable. They will eventually show up.