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Winter Pleasure


snow falls in swirled drifts
chrystaline dreams sparkling bright
each snowflake unique

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    Yes they sigh not a single flake is the same is that not a wonderment very good


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    Beautiful. So pretty and fresh and clean. I liked this a great deal. ~Pamela


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 26, 2007
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    This carries a sparkling essence of flight and fantasy. Best to you with this Haiku! Blue


  • Knight70
    November 24, 2007

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    Just a beautiful haiku to celebrate winter...

    This is so very easy to appreciate. You have penned a portrait of wintry imagery that is, in itself, "unique." Don