Embraces white souls,
Challenges ears to hear God,
Whispering secrets.
Author notes
One thing I notice about winter, is how it is so silent outside... sometimes all you can hear is the snow crackling beneath your feet. It is absolutely wonderful and incredibly eerie at the same time.
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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excellent
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ooo! i love this 'ku!
I've recently become quite fascinated with them
very well written
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Yes this is very good and I have noticed the silence in winter also
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A very nice winter Haiku with a nice wintry background to add a nice touch. Good luck,
eb
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This is very nice haiku. The real haiku is always talking about a nature and its connection with our feelings. Picture in the early winter's morning when everybody are still sleeping...I like the way you wrote it.
~Sonja~
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