like a swaying reed
filled with need
and quivering
shivering in the cold
like the watering points
of refreezing icicles
evanescent
as the white line of a crack
in pale blue ice
walnut smoke
and lemon
call it by name
call each fear
each desire by name
and kill it
word by word
kill these living things
as they are born
see my notes
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Interesting
This poem is very imaginative, dark and yet.. colorful?
Have I seen you somewhere before?
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perhaps you saw my dog
in the foothills
playing in the snow
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Good
An interesting collage of words that string together to relay a series of thoughts. The manipulation of words is witty and cleverly arranged. Your words speak with power and your mind set flows onto the page.
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Wonderful flow, fast paced, simple, filled with much to say..great imagery, quite enjoyed this piece thanx for sharing it with us =)
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where notes?
elemental
quintessential
incre mental
excre mental
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