A child learns…
Senses-
One by One!
Through the Eyes,
Strangely Sees!
Seeing Sense!
Wants to Touch,
Whatever he Watches…
Touching Sense!
Takes to Mouth,
Things he Touched!
Tasting Sense!
Fears for Sound,
Listens to Music!
Hearing Sense!
Takes in good smell,
Reacts badly for bad!
Smelling Sense!
He Knows all these five!
Uses all of them fine!
He knows none to use Bad!
Since-
He knows no Bad nor Good!
That’s a Child’s Innocence!
A contest entry
- #63 Touched by an angel by daviscth.
900 points, ended May 12, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How is the poem? If possible allot some marks. . Any mistakes, please mention.
Comments
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Aww
That's sweet, I like it
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cute
i like it
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Thank you so much for posting this in my contest. I enjoyed reading it as your words are very true.
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I like the way you have done this poem.Says a lot...I would give you 8 out of 10!
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Beautiful piece I like how you used all the senses here
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
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Yes, this is how kids are learning life and all kind of senses. Great captured withing your verses.
~Sonja~
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Wonderful! You have got beautiful images created in this poem. How a child understands the 5 senses has been well expressed here. You know boutRainbow, Crystal and Indigo children?
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Welcome to All Poetry
Very nicely written. You have created some excellent images here and through these images shown and excellent understanding of how we all learn the five senses
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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Thank you Mam
Thank you so much for your sincere comment on my poem. I have a doubt Mam. Is there any rule to submit a poem? For example, may I send the poems belong to Haikku, which is short in three lines?Hope you will answer and will be beneficial for me. .With Regards. -
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No there are no rules You can send any sort of poem, but in this contest there is only one poem per poet allowed
Hope that helps
Gaylene
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My child who is one year old.
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