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Gold, HM - Cake, Squirty, and Spot
blloob blloob/ Please feed me/blloob blloob/Can't you see/
blloob blloob/I need a treat/blloob blloob/So give me something good to eat/blloob blloob/Please I am begging/ blloob blloob/Can't you see me swimming/blloob blloob/See me follow your hand/blloob blloob/Please reach for that can/ blloob blloob/Please feed me/blloob blloob/I'm begging please/ © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved http://allpoetry.com/poem/3640590
The blloob blloob is to represent bubbles. This is about my son's three fish Goldfish name Spot he had a black spot and fins but he now is all gold. A Calico Goldfish named Cake.
And A Beta name Squirt. They are like dog's the see me around the tank and they beg for food, they follow our hand's, they let us hold them in the water.Never seen fish that are so friendly. They seem to have personality.
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A contest entry
- Tell Me About Your Pet/ Fresh, New Writes Only! by sassylilpoet.
450 points, ended December 2, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pet Lovers Contest!!!!!!!!!! by In-the-Darkness.
425 points, ended June 10, 15 entries
Honorable winner
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Great write. My dog has probably the same thoughts at the moment! Good luck in my contest!
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