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Snow

Snow falling softly
In the darkest twilight
Blanketing the world

Author notes

This is my first try at a Haiku

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    This is very good very good I have seen this many times well done


  • wildfiredreamer
    November 25, 2007

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    I haven't tried this yet so don't know about the form. I do like how it reads. Takes me back to the farm watching the snow come down. How peaceful and quite it was. thanks for the memory sis. love ya good luck.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    I loved this. It describes exactly how I think of snow. Good luck in the contest. Love ya, Cathy


  • Stardust-luvr
    November 24, 2007
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    for your first haiku you did a grand job many blessings always xx