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Tissue Please...

my frost bitten nose,
crying from winter's harsh bite,
I need tissue please...

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    Yes I can relate and like the humor in this little poem Well done


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 26, 2007
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    This is sure to envoke alot of empathy!
    Wonderful and creative take on the prompt.

  • michaeline
    November 24, 2007

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    Short and down to the heart of the problem.Love it.Your work and expertise in writing wants me to keep at it always to improve my skills.I felt the chill on my nose when I read this.I did not do the backround I would not know how to do it.


  • Shahrazad
    November 24, 2007
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    awwwww- so cute!

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