Can you hear the crashing waves
The roar of the sea
It's a true mark
An absolute thing of beauty
Timeless
Wonderful
Breathtaking
It's an unnoticed miricle
That any eye can see
Any heart can embrass
Amazing
Powerful
Yet still it's calm
With all the modern devices
Nothing is as strong
A contest entry
- Spiritualangel's 3rd Quicky Contest..PIF.. Picture and prompt inspired/ 15x15x15 by spiritualangel.
415 points, ended November 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW!!!! That's all I really have to say... I liked it a lot. I don't have any smart ass comments for this one... I guess that means it's good, considering you've seen some of the stuff I say when I'm reading the poems I read... lol
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Beautiful
Thia is really a beautiful write. Try writing it without the puncuation marks. I used to use commas and periods all over my poetry until I was advised by several respectful poets not to use them at all. Great write.
TD
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Nicely written and an interesting take on the prompt indeed. vivid imagery and good flow, well done in the contest with this one...Scott
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Good words
best of luck
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