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Swaying in the wind







Is the rope around your neck tied to the pole of recognition?
Do you hang there swaying in the wind, the center of attention?

Your long shadow covering the crowd as the sun sets…

When darkness consumes you, do you wonder?
Or are you glad your shame is finally hidden from sight?







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  • ecrivain01
    June 13, 2008
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    An old girlfriend?

    Interesting write anyway.


  • The Black Iris
    March 15, 2008

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    Seriously thought provoking. Disturbing but it made me think. I liked the form and the questions. You made the image vivid without over doing the description. I really liked it.