She doesn't smile at me,
I was supposed to be her angel,
we can't laugh and talk,
somehow her eyes reveal my danger.
She can't look me straight in the eye,
cause all she feels toward me is resentment and anger,
she can't say good things about me,
because she claims I'm the one that stole her innocence,
I was mommy's bad habit,
I was the consequence of her not using protection.
Author notes
Just read it please.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended November 24, 2007, 8 entries
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I get it...........
At first it sounded like the person was resented for stealing someone's virginity. But reading it again helped me to see the real meaning. This seems to be about a child who was unwanted...."resented". It appears when the baby came into the world...... he/she was seen as punishment, not a blessing.
Sad story......but a bold move to put this out there for others to view.......if it pertains to you. -
Woeful and willing!
Such a treasure that you truly are...
I was born out of a love that bore me in this way... But I would challenge you to challenge yourself with the truth... God loves you so much dear heart... and your life is the proof...
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Beautifully written...Such a sad tone and a killer ending...Great job
Lynda
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