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crenellated drifts
mirror storm clouds massing
a shooting star

A contest entry

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 5, 2007
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    nice image about the drifts mirroring the clouds. Good luck in the Winter Haiku contest


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    There is movemnt in this haiku and that helps create an ahaa moment. This is very good


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 26, 2007

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    Fantasy of beauty within...
    as the pristine drifts capture the
    image of sky and wind (building)
    and set aglow by star's tail. Blue


  • suseann
    November 24, 2007

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    Grand formulated Haiku of an impending storm's gather.Shivers grab the reader in thoughts related.Well done!