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Nightmare

Innocense flits and dances through my vile thoughts,
her sweet, succulent flesh calls to me from the abyss.
Madness flashes through my eye's--yet i do no wrong,
shadows cascading through my imprisoned psyche.

I can feel her close to me, her heart beating--
so softly does she coo her lullabyes but there
are darkened undertones in her words--in her songs.
I can feel the radiation her body expells,
poisoned feathers of delusion as she taints the air.
Fluttering fantasies delve off the deep end--
entrancing the digital dragon of love-less hearts.
The existance in which this lamb lives is shattered,
stalking through the forrests of her mind.

Dropping down, i scream....seering, blinding, twitching....
The PAIN my friends, is overbearing.....but
all i can taste is her metallic crimson wine.
To each pounding throb at my temples,
a blood-splattered vision guts my nightmares--
skinning deception of vivid fuckin falacies.
I can feel her breath on crystalized skin ||delusional||
a chilling penetration of angelic beauty with blackened wings.
Ahh yes, how my birdies chirp midst aphotic lunacy,
the silent screams of death resonating through
my sensory receptors; her flesh so soft and unscarred.

They are filthy! Those fuckin whore's yet i am nothing
but a dream to society; slitting the throat of justice.
I am the beast they all fear....leaving entrails of hate
amongst candles of life snuffed by evil's playground.

Another victim has been chosen tonight--as i spasm
in a visceral psychosis--insanity cast through faded eyes.
Now i see through HIS EYE'S.....THE FUCKIN BEAST HIMSELF,
wanting so badly to tear into the carcass of hatred;
to bathe in the blood of envy and lust.
My scalpel whispers demise in her filthy ears as my hand
closes upon her spewing mouth; my blade pressed to her
warm, tender throat......arteries pounding for freedom.

"I am your nightmare my little lamb,
tonight is where your life TRULY begins as i see it.
Don't scream, my deer....you were once wild and free...."
i growl, pressing the blade with delicacy.
"But now you are trapped, helpless and ready to TRULY live."

AHH YESS, THE BEAST INSIDE LOVES HER FEAR,
it's feeding my lusting hunger as she shudders beneath me,
so warm, so helpless......the smell of urine corruption
rising from the depths of hell; tainting the REAL innocent.

I am not a violent man nor am i cruel.....
without my ghostly apparition butchering impurity,
this would be a dirty, dirty world my friends.
The beast lashes out at all the hatred with a shaking blade,
slicing the belly of atrocities and gutting humanity.....
seeking out the truly evil CUNTS who murder others.
They are infested with diseases, selling their bodies to by-standers,
fuckin WHORE'S.....I severed their throats to extinguish all seduction.
Faces were carved and mutilated by a cruel hand of fate,
entrails dissected and pulled from the infectious corpse.

Ohhh how their blood satiated my quivering desires,
feeling the ecstacy as i hung the fuckin cunts in a tree,
dangling from visceral contamination; intestines wrapped tight.
The cops were horrified as they came upon the scene.....
i, the clever savior, watching from my perch.

The crime scene was to horrifying as they all vomited,
turning away from the site and hatred of humanity.
And in this.....i rest my case....
NOW LOCK ME UP......AND LET THIS WORLD GO UP IN FLAMES



Author notes

IN THIS POEM......the actual victim is myself (even though i'm putting myself in the head of the killer). Those who are familiar with my work know that with ALL of my violent murder writes i see myself as the one being butchered.

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  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 18, 2008

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    I was commenting on this piece before and just when I clicked the button for submission my fucking computer rebooted!!!! Argghh!! Anyway to start all over ahhem... This was absolutely stunning, the vocabulary is perfect for the context, the storyline is awesome, the imagery is wickedly vivid...umm this was just superb the whole way through, honestly. The line in the last stanza 'turning away from the site and hatred of humanity' I love the sense of misanthropy incorporated followed by 'NOW LOCK ME UP......AND LET THIS WORLD GO UP IN FLAMES' that line was the major highlight. I was going to say something else before my computer crashed but I've lost my thoughts *puts on a pissed off face*. Anyway this was just amazing, keep up the good work, I LOVED THIS!

    ~Emily~ xx

  • darkmindedfreak
    May 17, 2008
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    woah! that was disturbing. i love your style of writing. its very interesting. this is a great one!


  • jcat gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Syn....Syn.....Syn.....You truly out did yourself on this one!!! Just brilliant!!!! You are the BOMB!!! No one writes from the mind of a killer like you do!!! Keep rocken it girl and don't let them "GAG" you!!!


  • Erika Elektrikka
    December 17, 2007
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    fucking amazing


  • hommie-t
    December 16, 2007
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    this is wonderful! beautiful!. i applause


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 7, 2007

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    Another awe inspiring write! You rock when it comes to vile disgusting murder!! You managed to wowzer me into silence with this one Fabtastic hunni!! Best of luck in the contest!


  • NyteShade
    November 24, 2007

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    Sweet Syn i especially love the grin you sneaked into this piece lol. Great write. good luck in the contest.


    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      November 24, 2007
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      LMFAO

      as funny as the grin was, i took it out! HAHA
      IT WAS COMPLETELY ACCIDENTAL! But.....i might go add one in here.....just because....it's kinda humerous


      • NyteShade
        November 24, 2007
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        yeah you have to add it lmao, adds a nice touch i think.


  • skyviewexpress
    November 24, 2007
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    THIS, is my kind of poem. The deviance, the disgust, the demented thoughts of a serial killer... Yes, this is what I was looking for. Many do not realize how serial killers think. In this mind, its justification. Splendid and absolutely enjoyable to read. The words, used so perfectly like the pieces of a jigsaw puzzle. Thank you for feeding my disgusting needs with this extravagant poem.. Good luck and THANK you for entering..

    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      November 24, 2007
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      LOL

      I COULDN'T PASS IT UP!!!!
      For a couple days now i couldn't get this out of my head so i figured i'd enter your contest and write it down!!! LOL
      I could have entered my other serial killer poems but i wanted to write another one!!

      I enjoy this way to much, LOL
      GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
      I am absolutely OBSSESSED WITH serial killers and THAT'S AWESOME THAT YOU PUT SKCENTRAL DOWN AS ONE OF THE SITES!!! I actually am part of that site, so that was cool to see someone else who appreciates it!

      ^_^

      • skyviewexpress
        November 24, 2007

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        Well I'm glad this contest helped you muster up the remaining thoughts in your mind. I too have an obsession for these sort of things... Serial killers and death, its all too fascinating. I completely appreciate that site, its defiantly bad ass! I too, am enjoying hosting this contest as you are writing poems. I really do want to thank you for entering this poem. No one has yet to enter a poem from the perspective of a serial killer that meets my needs. But THIS, this is good. You should send me the links to any other poems you have written like this; serial killers, etc. Its enjoyable to read!

        • Synthetic-Nightmare
          November 24, 2007
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          LOL

          Well, i'm glad you enjoy them. I'm not that good at poetry but i DO love writing from a murderous perspective. SERIAL KILLERS ARE HUGE FOR ME! Especially killers who use more violent MO's such as gutting, dissection, mutilation and throat slitting. I AM GLAD YOU'RE HOSTING THIS CONTEST!!!! I was hoping it hadn't closed and i had time to enter. LOL. You'll probably really like "Interview with a Serial Killer" cause it goes deeper than this poem.....lol. Almost ALL of my poetry was deleted from the site because it was to violent in content and wasn't allowed. It was glorifying murder and EXTREME gore/brutality so i have changed a lot of my writing and made it more emotion rather than violence!

          I'm glad you really appreciate the site, IT'S GOOD TO SEE SOME OTHER SK FANS OUT THERE!

          • skyviewexpress
            November 24, 2007
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            Dont be modest! Although I have not read your other poems, your talent shimmers through every line of this one! Its sad to see poems deleted or banned for that kind of things. Poetry, it to most has lost its meaning. It is truly an expression of oneself, whether that be sick and demented or sunshine and butterflys. Its funny that you should say that though. I got into quite a comment scuffle with a fellow user, criticizing my choice to have serial killers as an option, saying I'm "glorifying" them. As you can see, they retreated from the debate, deleting their comments. Like I have said before, Some people are so afraid of death that they coward behind their own words. Not everyone thinks as.. Sane or humanely as others. And we are all most definitely not opinionated in the same way. I have come to terms with my own sick mind and my own sick obsessions, other people just dont appreciate that as much!

            • Synthetic-Nightmare
              November 24, 2007
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              WHAT??!!!

              FIRST OFF, THAT'S FUCKIN STUPID! Why the hell would someone go into YOUR contest and critisize you for having serial killers as an option?? In all honesty, these killers are demented, twisted artists. They create works out of the human anatomy and it truly shocks and amazes me. I agree wiht you, that people are afraid of death and there have been so many movies done where a serial killer (fictional) is created. It's because it's meant to SCARE people but i think what's TRULY terrifying is that this happens in every day life.

              I agree with you, poetry is meant for expressing and so what if i wrote violent stuff??? I LABELED IT CORRECTLY. YEP, THAT'S RIGHT. LABELED. I put on there that the material was disturbing and those who could handle it could read it. *shrugs*
              But fuck it, whatever. It IS THE SITES rules and i HAVE TO FOLLOW THEM AND BE RESPECTFUL!

              So, what killers really intrique you?? What method of murder?


  • Dmonik
    November 24, 2007

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    SYN is Back and better than ever!
    This is truly graphic, torrid...and fucking excellant!
    You done good girl, Truly
    Good luck in the contest

    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      November 24, 2007
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      LMFAO

      THIS STYLE IS SOOO EASY THOUGH!
      LOL
      I find this to be the EASIEST style of writing, at least for me cause there is ABSOLUTELY NO thining involved. This is my mind, as fucked up as it is

      (we both know i AM NOT AND COULD NOT ever be a serial killer)

      But i've done so much studying up on them and research on them that i feel i could actually think like one. LOL
      The collab we did yesterday was fun cause it challeneged me!

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