he crossed the bridge of golden fires
she gathered days of ruthless terror
he gambled his ego she gambled her life
he dug a sword of love in her tender heart
she bled with relish craving more pain
he burnt a stamp of authority on her lips
as she sucked all his lust with forbidden passion
he grabbed each moment of bliss with his fingers
she melted her breaths over each going moment
he destroyed her peace to carve his ownership
she accepted the ego of nonending commands
he loved her as she wanted and she loved him as he wanted
and they both died a death where theres nothing beyond the now
Please tell me what you think
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dreamlike and VERY, very sensual, this i think the ideal of every woman's need.
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Thanks for your comment.(I've edited)I thought theres confused passion in this poem Iwas myself unclear of what I was writing
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passion can be very confusing to anyone
... it's a nice piece.
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Thank You , I always wonder(whenever I see these words) why anyone would want to keep his nick as quitely burning.Can anyone go on burning quitely forever.Atleast I cant or say I wont!..hehehe..Thnks.Actually it sort of bothers me ,so please dont burn quitely btw I hope you arent anyways.
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bridge of golden fires, very good starting line. passion runs very deep and insight is also very deep. "she bled with relish craving more pain" beautiful line. great title with beautiful ending. thanks for sharing your poem.
all the best - sukhdarshan
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Hey ,where are you these days?
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Thank yo so much.
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good job
I loved the end of this poem, specially the stanza "He loved.....". Well done.
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Thanks for all the encouragement.
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