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Adore







adoring to be in lap,
to feel embrace, smell, heat, you!
kiss, a pure true love..
part of a moment, amaze of life,  
forget suffering, idealized rest, an hour of breaking,
suddenly appeared of nothing, hope re-ascend.
lovely, magic, as dreamt,
a piece of soul, forever, ever...
eternal you're..

 

don't even say goodbye.

 

 

 

 



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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 24, 2007
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    unique and lovely...Great job with the prompt
    Lynda


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    prompt is:

    ""We cannot really love anybody with whom we never laugh." -- Agnes Repplier
    or
    the pic above