breath like strong wind blows
frozen lips are pure and blue
crystal forms beneath
Author notes
prompt: Winter
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can relate to this haiku and I have been there more than once Well done very original
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I like the repetition of imagery in breath, pure, crystal...well-done! Blue
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Great description here
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for your comment BTW- enter my contest
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TOUCHING FOR THAT IS HOW i FEEL IN THE COLD WINTER MONTHS. THANKS FOR SHARING. SUCCESS IN THE CONTEST.
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