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Smile...

 

 


"The first step in a seduction
is a smile", wondering if sense could be had,
putting down book; facing grim morning, Main Street.

Coffee stop needed, pressed a dollar into the hand
of a man with a sign saying hunger;
made a blessing to his blue eyed smile.

Turned to coffee shoppe,

realizing  I had just given away my last dollar;
"My treat" said sweet-honey skinned beauty, "It goes around"...

I smiled.

 

 

 

Author notes

""We cannot really love anybody with whom we never laugh." -- Agnes Repplier
and
the pic above

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  • kaibab silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    So incredibly unique...and thought-provoking...good luck with your coffee this morning...


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 24, 2007
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    This is romantic and touching. I love it so much...Great job with the prompt...I am impressed

    Lynda


  • Mallig gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    So unique and lovely, wonderful visuals and warmth in this piece. Best of luck in the contest!


  • spiritualangel
    November 24, 2007
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    "My treat" said sweet-honey skinned beauty, "It goes around"...

    So delicious treat !


  • poet2angels gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    prompt is:

    ""We cannot really love anybody with whom we never laugh." -- Agnes Repplier
    or
    the pic above

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