Lonely nights passing slowly
Cursing night bell tolls,
I hear sometimes the tic tock sound
But never from you a call.
Silent is every where and in me too
Let's imagine a new world where I am with you,
Let’s take another chance to show the rest with pride
That we are we, we can do.
"Never let you go baby, never let you go"
Is the Rhyme I am saying like kids; like my prayers
Prayers run fallen, slipped from my lips
Tears roll down to my cheek.
Sometimes I wish to avenge, sometimes I cry
Sometimes I wish to make things up side down
Folding my grips I control.
I control to live with the memories of us.
So Glorious! So Smiley!
Who will say I am Alone!
Who dares to peep at my heart!
A contest entry
- I will never let you go... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks a lot.
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So Glorious! So Smiley!
Who will say I am Alone!
Who dares to peep at my heart!
.you touched the essence of this love as whole here..I love this piece..somehow it is a prayer of love..for love..and to love..a great write I love this piece..well done... -
thank you.
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Excellent
"Never let you go baby, never let you go"
Is the Rhyme I am saying like kids; like my prayers
Prayers run fallen, slipped from my lips
Tears roll down to my cheek."
Your muse is at its peak!! Keep going Siv
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thanks a lot venu dada.
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thanks a lot for your comment, shapla
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No one is alone dear sister, except we make ourselves lonely. The world is too beautiful a olace to be lonely. If men do not keep company, stars will do..Good
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"So Glorious! So Smiley!
Who will say I am Alone!
Who dares to peep at my heart!"
Hmm...these lines match your persnality, dosto.This is really really a good piece.I love the following lines-
"Silent is every where and in me too
Let's imagine a new world where I am with you,
Let’s take another chance to show the rest with pride
That we are we, we can do."
Keep up the good work.
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