flakes of fresh white snow
swirl in the chilled winter wind
black bear hibernates
In a list
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - snow haiku by piccola.
700 points, ended December 23, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I was just watching a special about hibernation and how much weight bears lose. I think I might try it
thanks for entering. Nice visuals and good form.
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This is a good visual here Well done
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Wonderful contrasts here: color, rest & motion...summarized in clear terms. Blue
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Exquisite haiku....
This is just gorgeous. I wrote a similar one about a red foxes in hibernation for this contest that I am just about to post. Black bears are just beautiful creatures. Bravo!!
Knight70
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