I've waited for this moment
for so very long
as every part of my body
beats with passion so strong.
Come quickly to me
fill all my desires
as the flames burning within me
lick higher and higher.
With kisses like wine
caresses intense
as my heartbeat quickens
and I have lost all sense.
Come to me now
discover my treasure
thrust into me now
we'll be awash with such pleasure.
Frantically we reach
paradise as one
as this destiny of ours
has only just begun.
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotica (Picture Prompt) by Beating.
450 points, ended December 1, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A well written rhyme with the only forced moments being the passion of the moment within the images of the poem itself.
sigh......the joys of youth.
John
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wow! Really good rythm and rhyming! I really like that this is more to the softer side of erotica, yet its still really sensual and just hot! hehe! I love it!
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Wow...this is real good stuff
It's erotic in a soft way...
I very much enjoyed it
Good luck in this contest
XXJeannette
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Oh My!!
Magnificent piece penned with images to stun the reader with heat
Wonderful take on the picture prompt
Loved this!!
Woooooooooooo Hoooooooooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent Sweet One!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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oooooooooh some beautiful wording indeed,
soft and wonderful makes one feel they never want it to end.
Thanks for sharing,
Love and Light
frozentearz
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