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Moth

The moon peering in above the fence,
through yellow lined window
is encircled by a rainbow halo.
moth, inside scares me, flickering sadly, like a dim light

Little flittaby, I chase with airy fingertips
Milk wings show

I am always good at catching; at least I am good for something.

Open the busted screen door
It says 'hello' with rusty hinges

hold bare delicate palms,splotched with red-

I let go and watch it fly
beneath the holding moon.

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