“Blades of grass bend, by weight of God’s tears”
My One Line Poetry
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A contest entry
- One Liners.. by MaaiL.
675 points, ended November 27, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice
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Very nice, very soothing but only when it rains and it never rains in southern california and i don't have grass where i live, the land is parched
i only have plants and flowers, i want to lay in the soft grass after reading this 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Oh and good luck in the contest!
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Coolio!
I love this! You got some much a cross using very few words!
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arggggggg here you go dalring.
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Mally this one line say's a lot, next time I see the rain and the grass that bends below it I will think of this quote, My Grams used to always say when it was raining God is crying. Thank you for that memory also,
I find this to be very deep for my own being, and a great reminder that sometimes the world events make
God's Tears and I make a difference.
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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