I was told
they were pebbles.
"some pebbles" I thought;
looking at them,
askance.
Jumbled together
along the ocean shore;
covered in beach moss,
too big and heavy
for even a stormy tide
to move and dislodge
their green mantles.
You wouldn't want pebbles that size
in your raked Japanese garden,
would you?
A contest entry
- Spiritualangel's 3rd Quicky Contest..PIF.. Picture and prompt inspired/ 15x15x15 by spiritualangel.
415 points, ended November 25, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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I suppose as long as they were all the same size, it really wouldnt matter how big they are would it?
Scott
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The significant word is 'raked'
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Good words dear.
best of luck.
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