I take out my quill
On this blank paper
In moments I show
Just how I feel.
Like an artist
Uses a canvas
My heart uses context
I write hardest.
Author notes
Artist Canvas prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- PROMPT PIF 15 entries/ 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 24, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please do not critique it, I like nice comments not bad.
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Congratulations on your honorable mention

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Very well done! Strong in brevity and I love the end line. For I often feel that way.
Thank you for entering! -
Nice & short
Short & to the point. Brilliant.
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Very concise and to the point...like this muchly.x


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Beautiful work here my friend!
I love your thoughts and take
on this prompt! Well done
and good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826 -
I think you are able to write well even when you are not thinking about it.You seem to do it with so much ease.Does it just come into your head and your thoughts like it does me.My work also comes from the heart and my passions.


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