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[ I take out my quill ]

I take out my quill
On this blank paper
In moments I show
Just how I feel.

Like an artist
Uses a canvas
My heart uses context
I write hardest.

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Artist Canvas prompt

In a list

A contest entry

please do not critique it, I like nice comments not bad.

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  • penman gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Congratulations on your honorable mention


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Very well done! Strong in brevity and I love the end line. For I often feel that way.
    Thank you for entering!

  • midnightblue1272
    November 24, 2007
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    Nice & short

    Short & to the point. Brilliant.


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 24, 2007
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    Very concise and to the point...like this muchly.x


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 24, 2007

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    Beautiful work here my friend!
    I love your thoughts and take
    on this prompt! Well done
    and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826

  • michaeline
    November 24, 2007

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    I think you are able to write well even when you are not thinking about it.You seem to do it with so much ease.Does it just come into your head and your thoughts like it does me.My work also comes from the heart and my passions.

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