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Thoughts and Memories

As I walk down memory lane
pitter patter it starts to rain.
In my mind the fog has come
while I sit and chew my gum.
It comes to mind what I remember
I think about that last december.
At christmas time how great it had been
when my family got together again.
It was time to share the glory
the blessings of the christmas story.
Of Christ's birth the real meaning
and the happiness of holiday singing.
Then I think of something new
thoughts and memories I have of you
I want to forget what had occurred
and all the things that I endured.
You were the joker but I was the fool
just because I trusted in you.
The wind of my mind starts to blow,
where I can say that "I don't know"
at a loss for speaking I must admit
thinking quietly there I sit.

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  • Blood Slurpie
    November 24, 2007

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    hmm If you had any sense in you, you'd look at my page and see maybe that I'm in the "athiests" group.
    Maybe I don't exactly want to hear about Christ so much, but I guess you can write.

    Just doesn't seem personal to me?