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Can't Fight This Feeling

I must confess this to you
Because I can no longer hold it in
I feel as though I might burst
If I don't get this off of my chest

You are my best friend and
The best thing to ever happen to me
My feelings for you are stronger
In my heart I know I love you

When I am with you I feel like flying
I feel like I can do anything
When you are by my side I feel like
I could run a thousand miles

Because I can't fight this feeling
I just can't do it anymore
I have tried, and it near killed me
In my heart I know you're the one


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Inspired by REO Speedwagon's Can't fight this feeling. It's my hope that someday I might really feel like this...yes I know its not a very good write....

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  • moonburndcheese
    January 25, 2008

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    actually i think that it is a good write and its basically a feeling ive had but i was to affraid to tell my buddy because relationships screw up friendship

  • ApathysEnemy
    November 24, 2007

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    awwww.... tear... thats so sweet that u feel this strongly about me... lol jk... and wht is with ur poems being inspired by classic rock???.. lol but goodness goes all the way around on this 1... lol

    • crosscountry07
      November 24, 2007
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      HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! You wish!!!!! and I love classic rock thank you!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 24, 2007

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    A wonderful take on this beautiful song.
    Well done and I wish you all the best in
    life. This is something that many of us
    think about all of the time. A love that
    is unconditional, everlasting, and most
    of all mutual. Well done and thanks a lot
    for sharing this one here! Keep up the
    wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826

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