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Five Senses ( Taste)





Love:

like taste …
of passing hands over your skin,
fingers for hairs,
fall asleep in arms.
open lips
to play with tongue  
in a sweet gentle kiss.

Sadness:

walking, in street of longing
crest-fallen, thoughtful, with anguish
doubled, in corner of bitterness,
straightly in square of solitude
looking adrift, feeling lost thing,
empty, out of step, forgotten,
sat in gutter, remembered you, and cried.

Erotic:

push with sweetness backwards,
body slides under mine,
with calm transmits much peace,
mouths looked by urgency
quenching thirst with saliva.
drugged under dependence
sip fountain of jellyfish.

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: five senses (Taste)

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  • Lj-
    December 4, 2007

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    The details of this were good, but I just couldn't taste it.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.