The wild wind howled
As the sun turned away
Skies of bright blue
Were replaced by clouds of grey
All alone i sat on the beach
Thinking of what to do
When i heard a gush of wind and a cry
That Pebbles, was when I found you
Your small little body
Was even smaller from hunger
With ragged fur and seeable ribs
It was clear you hadn't been looked after
So small you were
Looking for food on this lonely day
I picked you up, held you tight
Then took my Pebble away
A contest entry
- Spiritualangel's 3rd Quicky Contest..PIF.. Picture and prompt inspired/ 15x15x15 by spiritualangel.
415 points, ended November 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.
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a puppy
and btw seeable is a word now.
why?
because i said so
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Hey, nice! like everyone else has said, quite cute. I dont think seeable is a word tho, you probably should have used visible. anyways, nice read. keep writing.
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Awwwwwwww, how cute. A different take on the prompt for sure with this one. Great imagery, I'm with Vergil though, puppy or kitty? Scott
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Good imagery..
good luck in contest -
awwww!! did u find a puppy or kitty? *shakes it off* lol anyway great write ^^ i am a huge animal lover you have big hugs now! lol
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