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The Last Time

It never occurred to me,
That was the last time it'll be,
The last time we laughed,
The last time we went daft,
The last time you told me,
"When Mom Dad dies I'll be all you see".

Couldn't it be longer?
Why did it got shorter?
You were so precious,
I wanted to tell you good news first.
It was a shock to me,
I came home it was you I couldn't see,
My big brother whom I look up to,
I'm quite sure I'll miss you too.

I'll hope you'll take care of me from above,
I'll make your wishes come true to show my love,
And affection for the one I adore,
From above look at me soar.
You just had to leave God loves you well,
I'll just smile and pray May God save you from hell,
When I get older and think of you,
I'll think of all the mistakes that we both do,

It never occurred you'll leave me here,
Standing alone crying for someone I dear,
But I know you wouldn't wish me crying,
I'll smile and pray for you sighing,
I can't see your smile, your face, your eyes,
Where all my love for you lies,

Brother I love you and always will,
Take care of me Help my heart heal,
Cause I can't bear the thought you'll be gone,
I will be dark and all alone,
Brother be by my side when I need you,
Be with me cause...
That last time wasn't enough,
That last time it was too fast,
That last time.... I wasn't prepared.

Author notes

dedicated to my best friend whose brother died in an accident the day before her birthday, and the day before Hari Raya.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 24, 2007

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    This is indeed an impressive work revealing the truth of life also the immagery here is the true picture of this nature..You touched the pain and essence of the subject..This is indeed a wonderful work ..well
    penned with sharp and strong impact..well done...