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If I Was A Girl


If I was a girl and you were a boy
And nothing else mattered
I’d ask you to be my friend

If I was a girl and you were a boy
And no one else was around
I’d ask you to hold my hand

If I was a girl and you were a boy
And we were alone in the world
I’d know you would keep me safe

If I was a girl and you were a boy
And seas or distance were insignificant
I’d know we could be together

If I was a girl and you were a boy
And the universe answered my daily quest
You would be next to me
                      And we could grow old together

I am a woman and you are a man
And childhood fantasies are much more complicated
Than when I was a girl and you were a boy

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 24, 2007

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    I am a woman and you are a man
    And childhood fantasies are much more complicated
    Than when I was a girl and you were a boy



    Well this indeed a heartfelt write revealing the depth of the heart..and the heart is once again in great distress..this distress which is the cause and reason for the story of the life and the truth of
    life and that is very unpredictable..and this has come here with your strong words..well done my friend....

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 23, 2007

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    Ain't that the truth right there... lol life gets so complicated as we get older, if only everything in life could be seen through the eyes of a child, especially love....

    Karen