while the ocean swell broke down;
you told me it reminded you of us --
because you would do that for me;
cross the earth seven times searching...
But you've already proven yourself wrong;
cause that sea's been laying dormant
since the last time our eyes met;
and you haven't bothered to even
cross it yet.
Author notes
No notes.
No hopes.
Just broken bits of promises.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, what an amazing dipiction of a broken heart. I really enjoyed this.
And your author notes just add to the whole poem. Its like a got an encoure. Hehe
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Lawl. Thanks for the comment. This is an extremely old (in my eyes) poem; and I really didn't think it was all that great.
I'm glad someone enjoyed it, though.
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i read everything you write, love. I just never comment. Im not good at that kind of stuff...
WAY TO FALL ASLEEP ON ME
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You were just fine with doing it a couple years ago.
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wow
i know the feeling 100%
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