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My Little Candy Heart

I ate a little candy heart
it said I would fall in love.

The little candy heart was right,
I fell back in love with God that day.

I hated not being in love with Him
cause I felt so alone every night.

He held me in His arms
and told me everything would be alright.

The true love He showed me was unbelievable.
No man could have ever given me what He did.

The emotions in me were only pure joy,
happiness, and love.

I knew that my little candy heart was right,
when I gave my life back to God that night.


Author notes

hidingxeveryday

okay igive up!
i don't write poems about love.
seriously horrible prompt
sorry ican't do this. :'(
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Okay I tried, and this is what I came up with. Hope you like it.
I tried my best.

prompt: Little candy hearts and true love

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  • FallenFromGrace1102
    November 23, 2007
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    i loved this poem it was an awesome write and way cute :]

    *~*bee*~*

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    This is a very precious write thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck in the contest.Much love


    • Broken Machine
      November 23, 2007
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      Thanks hun! I tried, amazing isn't it? haha! What was the prompt again?
      Little candy hearts and true love?

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    Your prompt:
    Little candy hearts and true love


    • Broken Machine
      November 23, 2007
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      hehe.
      Okay see I can do lots with that.
      I love you huni!

    • Broken Machine
      November 23, 2007
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      are you kidding me?!
      hahaaha.
      there is no such thing as true love
      I HATE LOVE.
      it doesn't exist.
      probably like the worst prompt ever for me.
      well we know who's going to SUCK!


  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    November 23, 2007
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    nice i love it

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