Carbon pressured crystal
raw ice buried
'neath natures cloak
craved in madness
blood spilled of quest.
Shimmering scintillating display
tumbles over the minds eye
glowing in rainbow colors
prismatic refraction shining
delightful compression unclouded.
Softly falling petals
march plays proudly
pillow resting in child's hands
circle of love mounted
sliding gently onto brides finger.
Author notes
prompt: pebbles
A contest entry
- Spiritualangel's 3rd Quicky Contest..PIF.. Picture and prompt inspired/ 15x15x15 by spiritualangel.
415 points, ended November 25, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I have just re-read this and feel more appreciative of this piece. very nicely done
Lea -
thank you for your entry...
Lea -
OMG!
how in the world you found this poem with the word pebble...I will never understand...but it is brilliant indeed!
WOW...
congrats on the gold but more so on your incredible Muse...YOU REALLY ARE MR. INCREDIBLE...
this is really mindblowing...LOL...
well...I did say your Muse was in overdrive...LOL...
and YEP I AM A DORK...you wrote beautiful poetry based on pebbles...and I penned moss covered fear...aka....dork write...LOL
great job with this...wow!
love,
sis
xoxoxoxox
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How the hell you got this write out of that prompt I'll never know brother. But it is a good one, congrats on the Gold...Scott
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Carbon pressured crystal
raw ice buried
'neath natures cloak
craved in madness
blood spilled of quest.
Beautifully brilliant.
Good luck in conest -
WOW, now this a wonderfully creative write for the prompt. Your muse and you did a wonderful and unique job. Very lovely word choice and imagery. Truely heartfelt an deep.
Best to you
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wow not the take i expected but superbly done in many heartfelt ways of visionary wonderment. well done and i pray oneday i hear about a yes, I do lol lol many blessings always xx
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Wow...once again..not what I seen when I looked at the prompt. Such creativity...wonderful imagery and visions. Picture is a nice addition..gives it a different kind of meaning..that if just read..Best of luck to you in the contest.
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