Hues blinded my eyes,
dreamy wings fluttered by,
soul soared in your love,
until your sharp words
sucked all colors away
to a barren abode
of desolation
and million questions
echoing in my head
to drive my sanity away.
Author notes
crimsondew
prompt:
Butterfly where did you go
A contest entry
- Invite Only by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended December 6, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great imagery and write.
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Thank you.
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Excellent
Great imagery and write. I like
"Hues blinded my eyes,
dreamy wings fluttered by,
soul soared in your love," Best to you in the conyest.
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Thank you so much
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this is good i love you sis
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Thank you for your lovely words...
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This is a very nice piece thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love always
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Butterfly where did you go
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