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Sweet Farewell to a Gentle Admirer ---------- or ---------- A 2 x 4 Across Cupid's Spine

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Don't tell me that you love me or
stare me down with your bedroom eyes.
Because all your tender promises are
polluted soft soap lies.
I see right through your image girl
I see through your disguise.
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.

Don't give me that little girl "hurt" look,
no, just cover up your cave.
I'm not your willing servant and I'm
not your faithful slave.
A step towards your open arms is like a
step towards the grave.
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.

Love's not some real fragile thing.
Love's not just a song we sing.
Love's not just another screw.
Love's not something you can do.

Don't look at me eyes wide and say that
this time the hurt won't gel.
And please don't keep your thighs apart
'cause I won't ring your bell.
I've seen all your wanton products and
you advertise them well,
but, I've heard your PR lines before
and they just ain't gonna sell!
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.
I'm leaving just as fast as I can go.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Henry Elliot and I wrote this originally back in 1977. I pulled it out, dusted it off. and made some minor changes.

I used the picture prompt. I hope it was obvious.

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  • PoeticLove
    July 3
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    Whew!!!

    I'm glad it ain't me. awesome write. here, have three so sorry bunnies

  • Thanks for entering ^_^

  • trista gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    Sometimes...you feel like you can't leave fast enough. I found your author note very interesting, that this was first written so long ago and yet is just as fitting today as it was then. Nice job, and good luck in the contest.

    Best wishes,
    ~J.

  • Never Fall in Love
    November 30, 2007

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    I seriously have no idea on what to say at all ... not even the tiniest bit..

    Never ♥


  • Amera gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Wow! This is great! You sure let some chick get under your skin didn't you?

    Love,
    Amera♥

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