I thought about how stupid I had been-
How could I have thought
Harold was my friend?
The first time I saw him
He was all sugar and spice,
And the second,
He was equally nice!
Then the third time we met-
He made a bet-
And now here I am,
Falling to my doom,
Not even with a witches broom,
And I'm gonna get
ALL WET!
Author notes
A REALLY weird poem
Hope you like it!!!
Vivien
A contest entry
- ~ Poems about Animals~ Contest for kids up to age 13 by PinkPony.
450 points, ended January 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Weird is the best kind!
You are so funny!!! that's the longest title I have ever seen! Who would have ever thought about a title like THAT! (i am not saying thats bad I like the idea) You make me laugh!
I like this poem! its tvery funny! Yet sad 
!!! Poor duck! Stupid Harold! I think Harold was jealous! Cause he was probrally the ugly duckling!!!! 
I 'd will probrally read this poem over and over! It kinda seems YOUR TITLE IS LONGER THAN THE POEM LOL!!!!!!!!! i'm kidding!!!! nice job
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I like weird poems very much...
I hope you will write many more weird poems. This one is just so FINE! I like the rhyming AND the story.
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I think I might do just that...thank you for the advice. And the poem was definetely interesting. So thank you so much for taking the time. Good luck!
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