im full of emptiness
wanting nothing
i see no way out
i want no part
but i want to want
this is my only desire
the only thing keeping me alive
no hope
no promises
no tears
no smiles
just pretend everythings okay
because no one can help me
all i have is my own desire
and even that is slipping away
but i cant be alone
A contest entry
- True colours. by Delicate Fire Water.
450 points, ended December 27, 2007, 20 entries
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*Oh hun*
This poem was simply beautiful, and I can't thank you enough for your entry, it showed real emotion, and that was what I was looking for in this contest, thank you so much for your entry, and good luck!
All the best,
*Stephi*
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