She captured my heart, made captive my soul
joy when she is present is so immense
made dust of my walls, I have no defense
thoughts only of her, I've lost all control
She rules with an iron fist, a whisper
the smallest of frowns, I hold my hand out
a feeling so true, I don't have a doubt
completely enthralled, I do so love her
She is a fix I need, morning and night
addiction so sweet, I always want more
for her I would grovel on the bare floor
this love so good, it has got to be right
Tory, oh Tory, I love you my dear
in this poem I make it so crystal clear
Author notes
Dedicated to my Love Tory.
I cannot leave when there is so much more to be written.
Love you...Scott
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a beautiful dedication to the woman you love.
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very nice! you will go far! good luck!
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Well done here, best wishes to you in this contest,
Love
Tory
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A impressive poem you have written,also I'm glad you showed your contradicted feelings,at least your love conquered it all.I know it was not easy.Well done!
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Well, done Scott
A truly beautiful tribite to your love Tory. Expressions of love can never be taken back...
Your friend,
Brazos
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