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Empty Spaces

Blank pages
begging to
be filled
a hollow deepening
in my soul
all I want
is to be filled,
a wave of emotion
to overcome me.
If pain is fuel
for the fire
then love
will fill
these pages
but what is love?
'Tis but a chemical
a useless one
at that
but I am
still waiting
for the
spaces to
be filled

Author notes

What shall we use to fill the empty spaces?

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  • Morrigan Trinity
    July 27
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    I like it. I have one very simmilar to this. I think the first 2 lines may be exactly the same, even. Love you, sister. Miss you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • daviscth silver member
    November 26, 2007

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    This poem if filled with emotion. I can tell it's been well thought out and I enjoyed it very much. Cathy