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Unforgiven angel

unforgiven angel
what does this mean
who did they let down
why won't they be cleaned

what an honor
what a shame
that such a decision
should be made

you've done nothing wrong
but changed the world
and for that to the ground
to the ground is where your chained

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  • SilverMoonFeathers
    November 23, 2007
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    This is a nice poem to the username it was a great read i loved it great job