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u shall see

i tell you now my love
i beg of you
please i ask
please dont make me scream
please dont let me cry
im sorry i lied
but please babby not again
dont hit me
oh not again
youve left me marks and even scars
this time i cant let you hit to hard
the bruses seeem t never go away
they seem to be perminant
the ones that you make
im sorry i told you
but thats never enuf
im sorry
but i know it was too much
now i lay as you sit and laugh
your words are your finaly gone
never again will you i touch

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  • Laura
    December 9, 2007
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    ermmm ermmm check your english well your spelling xx